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Monica

4/2/2015

19 Comments

 
19 Comments
Margarita Mora Reyes
4/2/2015 05:45:46 am

I like how you have two different pages. Its very spacious, good job.

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Carmela Gonzalez
4/2/2015 05:46:02 am

I like how you say that price is not a big deal! Poor yorkie!

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Antonio Gonzales
4/2/2015 05:47:17 am

I like how your use of rhetorical devices + details runs smoothly throughout the ad. Great job!

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Avisha
4/2/2015 05:47:36 am

This ad is so simple but cute. I like the use of rhetorical in most of the sentences.

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Paola
4/2/2015 05:47:57 am

I love the cute story about the yorkie. I feel like the epistophe should have been a phrase small not sure though.

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Zoraya
4/2/2015 05:49:15 am

I like how you say that his favorite spot to pee is on a fire hydrant.

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Arnold D.
4/2/2015 05:50:10 am

I like how you incorporated your humor in your description. Particularly I like how you made comments like poor Yorkie, I know poor Yorkie. Though I liked how you offered him, I think your description could benefit from more the other things like negotiating price and knowing where to meet.

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atenas
4/2/2015 05:58:03 am

i like how you use detail when you describe the yorkie and the story of the yorkie too

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Moises
4/2/2015 05:59:43 am

I like how you used your analogy,Nice! The pictures of yorkie are adorable!

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Ivan
4/2/2015 06:01:57 am

I like how convincing your ad sounds with the use of your rhetorical devices.

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Andrea
4/2/2015 06:03:42 am

It's very persuasive.
"his hair doesn't fall off" I would buy him aha

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Jehiel Delgado
4/2/2015 06:04:31 am

excellent way of using analogy and the way you express poor Yorkie , in way the buyers will adopt him well done.

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Anthony Gojilde
4/2/2015 06:04:51 am

Your ad sounds like someone actually trying to sell something

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Saidy Brizuela
4/2/2015 06:19:54 am

I would buy it..if I had $800.
nice ad

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Arturo Torres
4/2/2015 06:20:54 am

I like how you used your devises

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Juan Padilla
4/2/2015 06:22:06 am

great usage of juxtaposition really cool

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Alejandro
4/2/2015 06:29:27 am

I like your use of epistrophe, your making the reader feel bad for the dog which increases your chance to sell it !

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Adelayda C
4/2/2015 06:37:44 am

I feel bad "I know poor puppy" and who wouldn't want it its a yorkie!!!!

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Jamey
4/7/2015 02:09:08 am

SUUUUPER cute dog :) to be honest if it wasn't $800 I'd buy it.

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