Monica

MS. BUI'S ENGLISH CLASS

Monica

4/2/2015

19 Comments

Margarita Mora Reyes

4/2/2015 05:45:46 am

I like how you have two different pages. Its very spacious, good job.

Carmela Gonzalez

4/2/2015 05:46:02 am

I like how you say that price is not a big deal! Poor yorkie!

Antonio Gonzales

4/2/2015 05:47:17 am

I like how your use of rhetorical devices + details runs smoothly throughout the ad. Great job!

Avisha

4/2/2015 05:47:36 am

This ad is so simple but cute. I like the use of rhetorical in most of the sentences.

Paola

4/2/2015 05:47:57 am

I love the cute story about the yorkie. I feel like the epistophe should have been a phrase small not sure though.

Zoraya

4/2/2015 05:49:15 am

I like how you say that his favorite spot to pee is on a fire hydrant.

Arnold D.

4/2/2015 05:50:10 am

I like how you incorporated your humor in your description. Particularly I like how you made comments like poor Yorkie, I know poor Yorkie. Though I liked how you offered him, I think your description could benefit from more the other things like negotiating price and knowing where to meet.

atenas

4/2/2015 05:58:03 am

i like how you use detail when you describe the yorkie and the story of the yorkie too

Moises

4/2/2015 05:59:43 am

I like how you used your analogy,Nice! The pictures of yorkie are adorable!

Ivan

4/2/2015 06:01:57 am

I like how convincing your ad sounds with the use of your rhetorical devices.

Andrea

4/2/2015 06:03:42 am

It's very persuasive.
"his hair doesn't fall off" I would buy him aha

Jehiel Delgado

4/2/2015 06:04:31 am

excellent way of using analogy and the way you express poor Yorkie , in way the buyers will adopt him well done.

Anthony Gojilde

4/2/2015 06:04:51 am

Your ad sounds like someone actually trying to sell something

Saidy Brizuela

4/2/2015 06:19:54 am

I would buy it..if I had $800.
nice ad

Arturo Torres

4/2/2015 06:20:54 am

I like how you used your devises

Juan Padilla

4/2/2015 06:22:06 am

great usage of juxtaposition really cool

Alejandro

4/2/2015 06:29:27 am

I like your use of epistrophe, your making the reader feel bad for the dog which increases your chance to sell it !

Adelayda C

4/2/2015 06:37:44 am

I feel bad "I know poor puppy" and who wouldn't want it its a yorkie!!!!

Jamey

4/7/2015 02:09:08 am

SUUUUPER cute dog :) to be honest if it wasn't $800 I'd buy it.

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Monica

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