Richmond High's AP Language course has courteously collected the latest local advertisements.
I like how you have two different pages. Its very spacious, good job.
I like how you say that price is not a big deal! Poor yorkie!
I like how your use of rhetorical devices + details runs smoothly throughout the ad. Great job!
This ad is so simple but cute. I like the use of rhetorical in most of the sentences.
I love the cute story about the yorkie. I feel like the epistophe should have been a phrase small not sure though.
I like how you say that his favorite spot to pee is on a fire hydrant.
I like how you incorporated your humor in your description. Particularly I like how you made comments like poor Yorkie, I know poor Yorkie. Though I liked how you offered him, I think your description could benefit from more the other things like negotiating price and knowing where to meet.
i like how you use detail when you describe the yorkie and the story of the yorkie too
I like how you used your analogy,Nice! The pictures of yorkie are adorable!
I like how convincing your ad sounds with the use of your rhetorical devices.
It's very persuasive.
"his hair doesn't fall off" I would buy him aha
excellent way of using analogy and the way you express poor Yorkie , in way the buyers will adopt him well done.
Your ad sounds like someone actually trying to sell something
I would buy it..if I had $800.
I like how you used your devises
great usage of juxtaposition really cool
I like your use of epistrophe, your making the reader feel bad for the dog which increases your chance to sell it !
I feel bad "I know poor puppy" and who wouldn't want it its a yorkie!!!!
SUUUUPER cute dog :) to be honest if it wasn't $800 I'd buy it.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.