Juan and Moises

MS. BUI'S ENGLISH CLASS

Juan and Moises

4/2/2015

23 Comments

Margarita Mora Reyes

4/2/2015 05:48:18 am

I like how enthusiastic the description sounds! Nice email by the way! Blaze it! Jk, you're always a loser when you're a drug user!

Arcenia Macedo

4/2/2015 05:48:38 am

Great use of asyndeton, you made it clear. It was not difficult to find.

Saidy Brizuela

4/2/2015 05:48:52 am

Humorous description and rhetorical devices. It seems like you know a lot about guns. I would buy the game just for the bag of Doritos though.

Jehiel Delgado

4/2/2015 05:52:01 am

very nice way of using these rhetorical devices in a game selling way. Very amusing and funny of the sherk character and call of duty game.

Andrea

4/2/2015 05:55:34 am

Amazing work, good use of asyndeton!

Adelayda C

4/2/2015 06:06:41 am

shrek is love shrek is life (don't look it up though if you do not know)
overall I would love to buy this esp since I like the bonus it gives out its like what every gamer gets Dorito's and mountain dew

Alejandro

4/2/2015 06:08:23 am

Your use of epistrophe makes this game seem worth buying by the way you elaborate the gameplay!

Carmela Honzalez

4/2/2015 06:09:42 am

I like how you say that you are shreking!! Funny how it has the picture of shrek in there

ivan

4/2/2015 06:14:38 am

Really good how you made it seem like it's an actual game being released and using situations that would occur with other video games "release."

Avisha

4/2/2015 06:20:31 am

This sounds like an actual game. "Shreking" lol

Monica

4/2/2015 06:22:28 am

Liked your use of rhetorical devices and the picture of shrek is funny.

Paola

4/2/2015 06:23:48 am

I like the shriek topic but I feel like the devices are to bundle up other then that I would so buy this game.

Jason

4/2/2015 06:24:13 am

"preponderance" OOOOOOOuuuuuuuuOOOOOOuuuuuuUUUUoooh

Moises

4/2/2015 06:28:54 am

JJJJJJJJAAAAAASSSSSSSOOOOOOOONNNNNN!

atenas

4/2/2015 06:26:43 am

lol i like the name of the new Call of Duty game

Arturo Torres

4/2/2015 06:29:05 am

Ill be waiting for this game.
ps. search up Shrek is love, Shrek is life on you tube.
I like how you used your devises.

Anthony Gojilde

4/2/2015 06:32:30 am

I like how mlg you guys sound and your aphorism of being a pro is so true that it's 3deep1me.

Goku

4/2/2015 06:32:43 am

I am a Super Saiyan!
-Goku

Brian K

4/2/2015 06:32:46 am

I just pre-ordered this game.

Arnold D.

4/2/2015 06:34:52 am

Your use of repetition at the beginning was great because I was excited to use the game!

Arnold D.

4/2/2015 06:35:36 am

kill people, destroy people, conquer people

Antonio Gonzales

4/2/2015 06:35:43 am

Great video game. Very original. I give this game a rating of over 9,000 out of 5 stars. Great use of epistrophe. Make the people feel bad about their noobish skills.

Jamey

4/7/2015 01:59:58 am

"Earthly remains" haha nice euphemism.

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