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Jehiel and Anthony

4/2/2015

23 Comments

 
23 Comments
Margarita Mora Reyes
4/2/2015 05:53:36 am

I like the idea. Nice story!

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Moises
4/2/2015 05:55:30 am

The story is funny, nice! good luck on selling the phone though.

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Goku
4/2/2015 06:30:05 am

I am a Super Saiyan.
-Goku

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Spider Man
4/2/2015 05:59:31 am

excellent! well done! very nice way to use these types of rhetorical devices on selling a phone. Well done call me if you need any help fighting any ghost! from your friendly neighborhood

Spider Man

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Green Goblin
4/2/2015 06:37:58 am

your opinions suck

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ivan
4/2/2015 05:59:31 am

the rhetorical devices used on here really make your description/story very entertaining.

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Andrea
4/2/2015 06:01:07 am

Shouldn't it be cheaper cuz of the ghost? lol good job

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Anthony
4/2/2015 06:10:05 am

We're selling them to paranormal investigators so that it makes sense

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Zoraya
4/2/2015 06:01:41 am

I like how creative this is.

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Carmela Gonzalez
4/2/2015 06:01:55 am

This is funny! I like how you say that the phone is a curse to you but treasure to someone else!!

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Arcenia Macedo
4/2/2015 06:02:04 am

The euphemism is really funny

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Saidy Brizuela
4/2/2015 06:13:39 am

Creepy phone.
Nice and persuasive ad

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Antonio Gonzales
4/2/2015 06:21:11 am

Interesting ad for sure. The idea of a haunted phone is quite original and scary as well. Good use of epistrophe. This gave me the thought that you never know who is hearing you speak in the phone . . .

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Arturo Torres
4/2/2015 06:22:43 am

I would buy this. I like your devises.

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Monica
4/2/2015 06:24:49 am

This is a creepy phone but good use of rhetorical devices.

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Avisha
4/2/2015 06:24:59 am

The rhetorical devices make it very interesting. I like how you told the story about how the phone is haunted

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Alejandro
4/2/2015 06:25:37 am

I like your story, the idea of it, but I got confused during the storyline because you guys switch point of view so I don't know if it's Jose's phone or Sam's phone.

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Juan Padilla
4/2/2015 06:25:44 am

funny uses of the understatement lol

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PGonzalez
4/2/2015 06:30:25 am

"This phone is treasure to you" I believe it said was a good touch to finish the ad.

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atenas
4/2/2015 06:31:18 am

ahah $200 more just because of the ghost.. funny

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Jason
4/2/2015 06:35:30 am

If its a curse to you how is it gonna be a treasure for me. I need a new phone that's working

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Adelayda C
4/2/2015 06:36:20 am

the phone is a cure so its a treasure to you
HA HA HA ALL ABOARD TO THE NOPE TRAIN
I like the enthusiasm put into it but still creepy

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jamey
4/7/2015 02:07:05 am

One question: whose going to buy a HAUNTED phone for that much money?!

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