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Jason

4/2/2015

25 Comments

 
25 Comments
Moises Mazariegos
4/2/2015 05:50:42 am

your ad has a nice description. good job on using euphemism in your description.

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Jason
4/2/2015 06:02:18 am

MOOOOOIIIIIIISSSEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS

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Moises
4/2/2015 06:09:43 am

yes?

Goku
4/2/2015 06:31:15 am

JJJJJJJJAAAAAASSSSSSSOOOOOOOONNNNNN!

Margarita Mora Reyes
4/2/2015 05:52:01 am

What an original idea and nice email!

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Adelayda C
4/2/2015 05:54:03 am

Bruh you is real

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Jehiel Delgado
4/2/2015 05:56:33 am

very nice idea of using the human sells in a nice way and also very amusing of the pictures to point out what you are looking for.

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AnthonyGojilde
4/2/2015 05:56:53 am

Your add is really funny, nice aphorism it matches the ad really well

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Antonio Gonzales
4/2/2015 05:57:10 am

Very persuasive, great use of rhetorical devices, very detailed, and great ad overall. I hope you find your son!

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Andrea
4/2/2015 05:58:52 am

Original and funny!

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Arcenia Macedo
4/2/2015 06:00:07 am

Your analogy made me laugh a little because it is a really close comparison, good job son. (I am your father)

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Saidy Brizuela
4/2/2015 06:02:50 am

HAHAH! I'm cracking. Nice ad and use of devices. It was very persuasive. I had a good time reading through it

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ivan
4/2/2015 06:05:24 am

Really unique idea and use of rhetorical devices especially the use of euphemism.

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alejandro
4/2/2015 06:13:32 am

shut up val

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Carmela Gonzalez
4/2/2015 06:06:32 am

Nice use of your devices! Really interesting how you say you have to know how to swing so that they can be the king! Nice Job.

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Juan Padilla
4/2/2015 06:13:56 am

nice work on the roast part great and funny Apostrophe

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Alejandro
4/2/2015 06:21:46 am

Nice use of euphemism, good way to compare both a teenage life and the jungle.

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Avisha
4/2/2015 06:22:37 am

This is amazing. Hopefully you find a son soon :)

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Monica
4/2/2015 06:23:41 am

This ad is very persuasive and nice use of your rhetorical devices.

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Arturo Torres
4/2/2015 06:24:37 am

Take Moises as your son. I like how you used your devises

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Arturo Torres
4/2/2015 06:27:37 am

wait never mine take me instead

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Paola
4/2/2015 06:28:19 am

I love the comment about roasting. kids need discipline and you seem like a you be cool father for a kid of 14.

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atenas
4/2/2015 06:28:26 am

lol i like your requirements for you potential son

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Arnold D.
4/2/2015 06:37:38 am

You seem like you would be a great dad. I like how you listed all of your heart warming qualities in the your paragraph. That repetition about you being there is key because it is really effective in you being an effective, great father. Awesome job. Pathos was on point...

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Jamey
4/7/2015 02:03:07 am

Very funny the way you used ms.bui's email and the part about your son having to be on varsity. Good job Jason

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