Richmond High's AP Language course has courteously collected the latest local advertisements.
I like how you used the analogy to make the customer buy your bananas. Over all I really like your product.
Awesome enthusiastic description nice work on euphemism
Nice use of ayndeton
I like your banana farm! I really like your asyndeton!
Liked your sense of humor when selling bananas. It is very descriptive and good use of asyndeton.
Like the use of asyndeton. I really hope it helps lose weight in 2 weeks.
bananas. aye. umm the rhetorical devices that were used as quotes was a good touch. I like how u in corporate the minions into the story
omg the analogy is so funny! I get cus if you are a fish out of water then your going crazy and bananas is like going crazy
These bananas seem too cheap for that price the description makes me want to buy em!
I like your use of asyndeton.
I like your asyndenton!! Now i want bananas...not mushy ones though!
this is cool I like how you had examples of people who had it before and you make me want bananas and you used today society how we want to loose weight to reel in costumers great work on euphuism
The potassium aphorism was really nice because its so contradictory. I also like the alliteration from Atenas' Animal Farm. That made the name stand out more.
Your aphorism is a nice segway into the whole ad
good use of analogy and very convincing because you make me want to buy these banananas
Made me wanna buy these bananas, good job on this though.
very good use of imagination to sell these bananas from place to place I would to buy these bananas at a cheap price. like your use of analogy
I am a Super Saiyan!
I love the way you stressed the importance of buying the "fresh" bananas ASAP
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