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I like how natural your rhetorical devices sound!
I like how you make the rhetorical devices very funny!
I like how you use humor in this by making it seem like you're searching for a boyfriend rather than a roommate.
I love the story about the ex. it works great into the ad. As well as the picture of him just sitting there. it was pretty clever.
All use of rhetorical are so funny and wisely used.
The rhetorical devices fit in well with the ad, which makes it funny.
lol i love the way you use your rhetorical devices they are really funny!!
I wana be your roommate but im shy
The psychotic boyfriend and milking a dog were so smart and funny in conveying how difficult it is to convince others he is safe and harmless. I like how you made it relatable by using pathos in the emotional aspect of deciding whether to clean your room or not... *guilty of that*
P.S. High standards... I wonder how that guy is your ex... your ex... he was your boyfriend..... *?*
he was your... boyfriend... *?*
I like how you talk about your psychotic boyfriend and that it's no big deal
I like how you used your litotes.
Your character has a lot of personality and the analogy you used is a good one
very funny of how you use the rhetorical devices in a humorous way try describe your psychical boyfriend. o_0
P.S I thought it was Arnold Schwarzenegger
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i like how you used the rhetorical device analogy.
I like how you specify specific qualities you are seeking for in a roommate. It kinda got me thinking of who our roommates are going to be once we go into college. Great use pf rhetorical devices, especially the litotes (I enjoyed that one the most).
Love the pictures. I really like the way you used the asyndeton
I like how you talk about your boyfriend and the pictures are funny and when you said it's no big deal
Good use of euphemism, it really defined the meaning of the rhetorical device!
I am a Super Saiyan!
ummm ok kinda creepy that you used a picture of me with my shirt off without asking but its ok lets get passed that. I love the part where he has to find you attractive just to break the ice. Really funny.
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