Arcenia

MS. BUI'S ENGLISH CLASS

Arcenia

4/2/2015

25 Comments

Margarita Mora Reyes

4/2/2015 05:41:43 am

I like how natural your rhetorical devices sound!

Carmela Gonzalez

4/2/2015 05:51:22 am

I like how you make the rhetorical devices very funny!

ivan

4/2/2015 05:56:15 am

I like how you use humor in this by making it seem like you're searching for a boyfriend rather than a roommate.

Paola

4/2/2015 05:57:13 am

I love the story about the ex. it works great into the ad. As well as the picture of him just sitting there. it was pretty clever.

Avisha

4/2/2015 05:57:17 am

All use of rhetorical are so funny and wisely used.

Monica

4/2/2015 05:58:20 am

The rhetorical devices fit in well with the ad, which makes it funny.

atenas

4/2/2015 06:06:34 am

lol i love the way you use your rhetorical devices they are really funny!!

Jason

4/2/2015 06:07:13 am

I wana be your roommate but im shy

Arnold D.

4/2/2015 06:07:25 am

The psychotic boyfriend and milking a dog were so smart and funny in conveying how difficult it is to convince others he is safe and harmless. I like how you made it relatable by using pathos in the emotional aspect of deciding whether to clean your room or not... *guilty of that*
P.S. High standards... I wonder how that guy is your ex... your ex... he was your boyfriend..... *?*

Arnold

4/2/2015 06:08:17 am

he was your... boyfriend... *?*

Zoraya

4/2/2015 06:12:02 am

I like how you talk about your psychotic boyfriend and that it's no big deal

Arturo Torres

4/2/2015 06:12:10 am

I like how you used your litotes.

Anthony Gojilde

4/2/2015 06:13:17 am

Your character has a lot of personality and the analogy you used is a good one

Jehiel Delgado

4/2/2015 06:17:19 am

very funny of how you use the rhetorical devices in a humorous way try describe your psychical boyfriend. o_0

Jehiel Delgado

4/2/2015 06:18:35 am

P.S I thought it was Arnold Schwarzenegger

The 420 quickscoper sweg master

4/2/2015 06:20:36 am

i like the way i like this like

Moises

4/2/2015 06:21:38 am

i like how you used the rhetorical device analogy.

ivan

4/2/2015 06:25:19 am

I'm shy

Jason

4/2/2015 06:25:54 am

You're gay

Antonio Gonzales

4/2/2015 06:27:20 am

I like how you specify specific qualities you are seeking for in a roommate. It kinda got me thinking of who our roommates are going to be once we go into college. Great use pf rhetorical devices, especially the litotes (I enjoyed that one the most).

Andrea

4/2/2015 06:28:01 am

Love the pictures. I really like the way you used the asyndeton

Saidy Brizuela

4/2/2015 06:29:14 am

I like how you talk about your boyfriend and the pictures are funny and when you said it's no big deal

Alejandro

4/2/2015 06:32:42 am

Good use of euphemism, it really defined the meaning of the rhetorical device!

Goku

4/2/2015 06:34:28 am

I am a Super Saiyan!
-Goku

Jamey

4/7/2015 02:14:16 am

ummm ok kinda creepy that you used a picture of me with my shirt off without asking but its ok lets get passed that. I love the part where he has to find you attractive just to break the ice. Really funny.

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