Mayalyn

MS. BUI'S ENGLISH CLASS

Mayalyn

4/2/2015

20 Comments

Arcenia Macedo

4/2/2015 05:55:13 am

Your use of asyndeton is very funny. Listing all of those chores makes it seem endless.

Saidy Brizuela

4/2/2015 05:58:34 am

Great! does that mean you don't pay rent and just do chores?
Nice way to establish this and the use of rhetorical devices.

Adelayda C

4/2/2015 05:59:18 am

sooo I like how you act like it was nothing about all the long list of chores.

Jason

4/2/2015 06:01:42 am

Im gonna rob your house, but anyways great use of asyndeton on those chores that im not gonna do

Alejandro

4/2/2015 06:03:46 am

I really like your use of litotes, makes it seem like it's not a lot of chores.

Margarita Mora Reyes

4/2/2015 06:08:10 am

I love how nonchalant y'all are about the long list of chores.

ivan

4/2/2015 06:09:58 am

I really like the calm tone throughout the ad and the use of litotes is a good way of convincing people.

Moises

4/2/2015 06:11:29 am

Haha Nice use of analogy. The description made me laugh, good job.

Monica

4/2/2015 06:13:47 am

Good job on your use of rhetorical devices. The descriptions are very descriptive which made me laugh.

Avisha

4/2/2015 06:17:14 am

Very intersting. Nice use of asyndeton.

Paola

4/2/2015 06:18:00 am

I like the idea of the roommate with the hit of actually seek like a type of maid.

Andrea

4/2/2015 06:23:48 am

Great use of rhetorical devices, like the asyndeton.

atenas

4/2/2015 06:24:24 am

i like how you said that you need someone that motivates you

Carmela Gonzalez

4/2/2015 06:27:25 am

I like the "someone chill as the ocean" part!

Anthony Gojilde

4/2/2015 06:28:23 am

Nice ad, your litote is a funny way to explain the job description

Arnold D.

4/2/2015 06:30:47 am

Sounds like a very easy time living there! Except for the cleaning, cleaning, dishes, laundry, jobs... Jk But really, nice way to use the litotes since it makes a lot seem like "not... much."

Juan Padilla

4/2/2015 06:32:14 am

that assumption of how you say its safe when your in a neighborhood with old people lol

Arturo Torres

4/2/2015 06:35:01 am

That is a long list of chores.

Jehiel Delgado

4/2/2015 06:35:30 am

I like your use of rhetorical devices of how to win the interests of the public to win their attention to rent the room.

Jamey

4/7/2015 01:55:23 am

"You don't have to do much except..." that's my favorite part. Very clever

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