Alejandro and Ivan

MS. BUI'S ENGLISH CLASS

Alejandro and Ivan

4/2/2015

20 Comments

Carmela Gonzalez

4/2/2015 05:49:29 am

I like how you say that never judge a person if they are wearing the Gammas. Very clever!

Andrea

4/2/2015 05:49:47 am

The way you guys used the aphorism was good.

Anthony Gojilde

4/2/2015 05:51:56 am

Persuasive arguments to buy shoes and your aphorism also helps sell the product.

Paola

4/2/2015 05:54:21 am

I like how the persuasiveness for selling the shoes. I feel like highlighting and then at the end saying which was which was a really cool idea

Avisha

4/2/2015 05:54:35 am

Like the way ya'll used aphorism in this ad.

Monica

4/2/2015 05:55:33 am

I liked your use of rhetorical devices which made the ad very creative and well written.

Margarita Mora Reyes

4/2/2015 05:58:28 am

I like that you put a real number! Also nice phrases!

Arnold D.

4/2/2015 06:00:37 am

I particularly like how you said they are like hell, because they have heat. Good way to use alliteration and convey their heat.

atenas

4/2/2015 06:01:32 am

i like how you advertise your shoes and highlight the rhetorical devices

Juan Padilla

4/2/2015 06:01:57 am

Nice Jordan's m8 will take

Antonio Gonzales

4/2/2015 06:02:06 am

I enjoy reading your ad a lot! Really great bargain + you'll be in style. I enjoyed the part when you said to never judge a person wearing the Gammas.

jASON

4/2/2015 06:05:12 am

bRUH THos3 r my Sho3s

Moises

4/2/2015 06:07:28 am

The epistrophe "price" was a good idea to use. overall i liked the description and the images are nice.

Arcenia Macedo

4/2/2015 06:08:03 am

The analogy you used really makes it clear you are a 21st century teenager selling these shoes.

Jehiel Delgado

4/2/2015 06:12:09 am

I like how you used aphorism to help sell out the shoes if you were in this shoe how would you feel.

Adelayda C

4/2/2015 06:14:42 am

MAN PREACH PREACH I like how you said about don't judge a man and walk a mile on his shoes but if he has gammas don't judge him at all lol and about you having the heat lol man it persuaded me to want to buy some

Arturo Torres

4/2/2015 06:15:23 am

i like how you used your epistrophe.

Saidy Brizuela

4/2/2015 06:24:49 am

They are a little to expensive- they say.
But I like all the rhetorical devices. #aphorism

Goku

4/2/2015 06:34:00 am

I am a Super Saiyan!
-Goku

Jamey

4/7/2015 02:12:03 am

Excellent job describing the shoes. You made them seem really appealing.

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Alejandro and Ivan

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