Richmond High's AP Language course has courteously collected the latest local advertisements.
I like how you say that never judge a person if they are wearing the Gammas. Very clever!
The way you guys used the aphorism was good.
Persuasive arguments to buy shoes and your aphorism also helps sell the product.
I like how the persuasiveness for selling the shoes. I feel like highlighting and then at the end saying which was which was a really cool idea
Like the way ya'll used aphorism in this ad.
I liked your use of rhetorical devices which made the ad very creative and well written.
I like that you put a real number! Also nice phrases!
I particularly like how you said they are like hell, because they have heat. Good way to use alliteration and convey their heat.
i like how you advertise your shoes and highlight the rhetorical devices
Nice Jordan's m8 will take
I enjoy reading your ad a lot! Really great bargain + you'll be in style. I enjoyed the part when you said to never judge a person wearing the Gammas.
bRUH THos3 r my Sho3s
The epistrophe "price" was a good idea to use. overall i liked the description and the images are nice.
The analogy you used really makes it clear you are a 21st century teenager selling these shoes.
I like how you used aphorism to help sell out the shoes if you were in this shoe how would you feel.
MAN PREACH PREACH I like how you said about don't judge a man and walk a mile on his shoes but if he has gammas don't judge him at all lol and about you having the heat lol man it persuaded me to want to buy some
i like how you used your epistrophe.
They are a little to expensive- they say.
But I like all the rhetorical devices. #aphorism
I am a Super Saiyan!
Excellent job describing the shoes. You made them seem really appealing.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.